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you sit beneath a shadow
your willowy heart wallowing
you hold the soles of both your feet
with the palms of both hands
on the cold marble floor;
the damp sun setting-
another day goes by, without him.

he cringes for your touch
as such, oblivious under a mat of unkempt hair.
sighing like a furnace
you look out at large,
knowing he looks back
©2007-2009 ~K-Sajid
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I rather like this one if I ignore the title =P
I'm sorry to whoever liked my old style better. I've just... drastically deviated away from it... I feel like it's not me anymore...
The first part of a seven-part poetry project I started and never finished.

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Beautifully written; simple and vivid. The sort of thing that makes one long for something.

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xD like your waterfall picture the other day made me crave for chocolate and milk when I saw it a second time :S =P

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'Sighing like furnace'
Seven ages of Man? Ah, don't I love Shakespeare.
I liked it. Even in its incompleteness. :)
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:lol: we had this conversation once before on facebook kid!

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tears of happiness...
kept her warm "on the cold marble floor"

your words flowing with affection or conviction

i'll keep you close to my heart...if you don't mind
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=) Thank you for that nice comment

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October 29, 2007
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